Hello guys,
I already announced my current project in the "Your Announcements" forum here. However, although there's not much of it to see I would like to get some separate feedback on the story, especially the dialogues. Do you think it's leaving the player/reader curious enough? Do you have suggestions on how to improve it?
Here's the small demo: Humanity's Silence
BTW: If you notice a weird use of words, I would like to know that as well since I'm no native speaker.
Greetings
BrightBit